Comments of chapter undefined of Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Emmanuel_Peter203

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Emmanuel_Peter203AuthorEmmanuel_Peter203

Sorry for the late update, but I'll be taking a short break due to the novel. I'm going to go over the plot again in order to avoid problems and improve it in order to make the story more interesting. Love y'all and when I return, it will be two chapter updates per day. The break is only for 5 days. Thanks for reading!

1yr

Emmanuel_Peter203AuthorEmmanuel_Peter203

they both took the surname of their father

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DaoistC7LUY6Lv2DaoistC7LUY6

don't ask me everything

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Robert_C_7044Lv15Robert_C_7044

I hate how they offer me, the main character of genius and yet he continues to do dumb things like I can understand him being emotionally stilted, but some decisions are just dumb

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GodOfTwoPathsLv15GodOfTwoPaths

author. I'll be honest with you. the story started out decent. I personally feel that you have spread the story too thin with too many POV for other characters. I find it unreadable around chp 200 .

1yr