Comments of chapter undefined of Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

The exposition at the start of the chapter seemed weird to me. Far as I can tell everyone in that scene already understood much of what they were explaining so it seems weird they'd discuss it with each other other than as a way to give the reader information. Next time, make sure there's at least one character in a scene who needs that information if they are going to be discussing it outloud, please.

I already hate the hoe 😒

These run-on sentences are atrocious

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter.

Interessante os mistérios so me deixa mais interessado. Espero que essa garota não seja o companheiro feminino burro e inútil que so atrapalha. Quando vai falar da aparencia do mc quase confundi ele com uma mulher ja que nen sei o nome dele ainda .

Thanks for the Chapter!

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I don't like this chapter to be honest. I don't like some random dude know what's Happening bull#+$# .. .

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Yeah. .author not lie.. I so confused how this chapter work why did author make this chapter like puzzle. So many mystery and unknown not explain yet.

Author, words of advice. Do not try to use run on sentences unless it is particular to a characters personality trait. Often used for someone who speaks fast without breaks. Descriptive details on characters and scenery are needed. It adds immersion to the story for those who enjoy those vivid details.

I will change my ways. Thanks for saying.

Hi author, I just started reading this novel, it sounds interesting but there is no description how th mc looks and the girl he met looks and age? Kind regards