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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ker: Danmachi Fanfiction

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TheCreatorOfRice
TheCreatorOfRiceLv13TheCreatorOfRice

nice

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frostqilin
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thx for the chapter. it was quite for your first yuri scene. and yes focus more on story with some yuri scene inbetween.

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Tryn_Eudo
Tryn_EudoLv13Tryn_Eudo

Pretty tame for a first-time yuri lemon scene. Thought it would be more explicit and vulgar but the scene is decent.

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BaaSheep123
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Thank you for the chapter author. I thought it was pretty good though as a few others did say, maybe more interaction could have been added Though to be honest, I'm not sure what else to say since I'm not a writer lol.

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Reddragon34
Reddragon34Lv14Reddragon34

Great Chapter!! I enjoyed the scene!!

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

hmm. 5/10.