Einlion
TFTC I Like your idea and I support it....... But pls don't make mc useless and weak...... I'm tired hearing about how weak mc is...... Like seriously...
You're acting as if they will never meet again. Besides, Chiron already taught him the basics he needs to learn to master Reinforcement. At this point, it depends on Thomas to actually master it.
OmnipresentGod:I am not against character development but you're making him like a fool...... he is just thinking about making harem... But if this is your development then it's fine by me....... But who is more knowledgable about mana than chiron(and in one piece) now you making distance between them.....
What was the purpose of having servants if he is never going to see them again. As you said they will only get stronger when they get their bounties and mysteries and by that point they will be too strong for the mc to catch up. It doesnt seem like the mc is training or trying at all. Considering you have THE healer in your crew you could train to an inch of death and be healed by the afternoon.
bruh, but if we go for this, unless the novel is multiverse and the MC travels through other worlds, the destiny part is completely useless, I would have simply made him join the straw hats from the beginning and that's it, everything the topic of summoning servants to help him, only to have them go off on their own in the end is just futile
LOL I think the story people want to read is Drake SI as the MC, using all the advantages she could have with One Piece knowledge, building a powerful crew and fleet, and becoming the Pirate Queen. But well, that isn't the story, as the MC is Thomas, and will follow what is the best for him and his growth. I think it is a very good idea that he travels with Straw hats, but it still is disappointing, I guess? Thanks for the chapter.
This is what we read fanfics for. Changes, twists, different developments and the author's own take on a favorite story. If I wanted a bland self insert without any changes to the plot I'd watch/read the original and use my imagination to picture how I would act in each situation. Keep up the good work, Ein.