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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Wild Hunt

Ethanma
EthanmaLv13Ethanma

I feel like drake is manipulating him, to get him out of her way so she rweally could do what she wants without having the threat of him using his commands spells on her I'm not talking bout sleeping around

Einlion
EinlionAuthorEinlion

It's almost like she's a pirate that desires freedom and adventure xD...

JustRonhan
JustRonhanLv13JustRonhan

At this point the whole story is the mc being called useless and it’s getting aggravating.

LifelessMan
LifelessManLv5LifelessMan

In this chapter we learn that Drake is the real main character

Shuten
ShutenLv13Shuten

this chap felt a bit let down

OmnipresentGod
OmnipresentGodLv4OmnipresentGod

TFTC I Like your idea and I support it....... But pls don't make mc useless and weak...... I'm tired hearing about how weak mc is...... Like seriously...

ZingLC
ZingLCLv13ZingLC

I regret voting for this instead of continuing the naruto story. Even though the naruto one turned into a pokemon catch them all, it was at least enjoyable to read.

Ivan_Accosano
Ivan_AccosanoLv4Ivan_Accosano

What was the purpose of having servants if he is never going to see them again. As you said they will only get stronger when they get their bounties and mysteries and by that point they will be too strong for the mc to catch up. It doesnt seem like the mc is training or trying at all. Considering you have THE healer in your crew you could train to an inch of death and be healed by the afternoon.

Artonius532
Artonius532Lv1Artonius532

bruh, but if we go for this, unless the novel is multiverse and the MC travels through other worlds, the destiny part is completely useless, I would have simply made him join the straw hats from the beginning and that's it, everything the topic of summoning servants to help him, only to have them go off on their own in the end is just futile

PolyamoryIsntHarem
PolyamoryIsntHaremLv2PolyamoryIsntHarem

Yeah I can't anymore man. You have made Drake take on too big of a role and sidelined your MC. MC choosing to leave and being kicked off are 2 very different things, now he will never have a place on that ship again. Drake is easily the worst character you have ever written.

Vahvel
VahvelLv3Vahvel

What was the point of introducing summons and the master-servant relationship in the first place if you're simply going to let them do their own thing without the MC? Feels stupid ngl

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Krisnan
KrisnanLv15Krisnan

Farewell servants hello Strawhats. Sorry Astolfo your gender switch reveal will have to wait.

Darklord02
Darklord02Lv4Darklord02

Yeah dude….. please go back to the Naruto fic as the primary fic

Lord666Acedia
Lord666AcediaLv5Lord666Acedia

feels wholely pointless , creating ur own crew then..... the rob should ahve just added him to the og crew

ImpliedCutFox
ImpliedCutFoxLv15ImpliedCutFox

Tom has a very weak mentality, it doesn’t matter if he gets strong when people can literally just talk down to him or he starts self doubting in the middle of a fight. Honestly you would think Chiron would have trained him better, what a wuss.

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OllieZ
OllieZLv6OllieZ

LOL I think the story people want to read is Drake SI as the MC, using all the advantages she could have with One Piece knowledge, building a powerful crew and fleet, and becoming the Pirate Queen. But well, that isn't the story, as the MC is Thomas, and will follow what is the best for him and his growth. I think it is a very good idea that he travels with Straw hats, but it still is disappointing, I guess? Thanks for the chapter.

sloth_ninja
sloth_ninjaLv4sloth_ninja

thanks for the chapter even if it gave me sadge

CamlEnvy
CamlEnvyLv4CamlEnvy

Ja estava esperando isso acontecer faz uns 2/3 dias . Meio que não quero ler isso mais agora , vou deixar acumular por 1 ou 2 mês , quem sabe bate a vontade de ler isso depois de um tempo . Obrigado pelo o capítulo e força para frente . Bye .

KaiChisaki
KaiChisakiLv4KaiChisaki

disappoint, just gave me that feeling.

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LAW
LAWLv10LAW

Time to finally change the cover to something else? Also going with the straw hats is a good idea though i will miss caenis

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TJ_Watkins
TJ_WatkinsLv15TJ_Watkins

This is what we read fanfics for. Changes, twists, different developments and the author's own take on a favorite story. If I wanted a bland self insert without any changes to the plot I'd watch/read the original and use my imagination to picture how I would act in each situation. Keep up the good work, Ein.