Great bro! Obviously it has it’s own flaws. Because nothing is perfect. The novel starts off great with explaining everything what going on in a good way. ( I wouldn’t say perfect) Keep working hard like this and you will definitely achieve something in life. (And just my advice! Work on a noevl at a time. Don’t work on multiple projects)
This novel is amazing! It has a very good world building and character design. The descriptions of the characters and the action + gore is very interesting to read! The story is overall very good! Can’t wait for more updates! 😊
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Your writing is very elegant, though I think this work is a bit wordy, which makes it hard to stay immersed in the story. I don't mean that it's boring. On contrary, the story is pretty well defined. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
