LazyZen
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Nice
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Reading the first chapter, the only thing on my mind is, that I'm looking for more.
For me a good first chapter. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for the chapter
you know what I dislike about cod in warzone the bo guns have 5 attachments like the mw 1s but vanguard get 10
you know that gamers mind and body would fit in like a glove caouse of the schooter aspeckt of cod
author very good novel, I entered by chance but I stayed because of the quality the only thing I have to say is that you would have to ask for it more so that more people would read it
Amateur writing?? This is better that most novels out there......Great work!!