You had me at murder hobo...
The first chapter was amazing. The punctuation, talking, and the way the sentences are structured is amazing. I hope you continue this story author cuz a lot of DC stories get dropped.
I love it so far my g, you are an incredible writer and the idea is amazing, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Such a great Fic, excellent example of how fics should be written, as if they were books themselves to be read by the public.
Author seems to have died a horrible death. We have concluded that the cause of death was fans of said authors book finding him and strangling them in a way to get him to post more often. They will be missed.
this is amazing, really early in the chaps but i havent seen a single mistake anywhere. also the way the author describes yautja society and quite literally everything else is awesome. havent been this excited to read a new fic in quite some time.
This is a great story. For future references perhaps you can make a couple more yautjas have a little more human features as the main characters romance that I’ve seen in your tags. But don’t make the added yautjas a reincarnated person. Please don’t make the story be generic as the MC is having relationships on earth and them wanting to be connected to the characters. Perhaps you can make the main character have more yautja personality with with a little of his previous personality but make him a little more ruthless. Maybe you can make the main character have a more leadership role for his race in the near future.
4 chapters in and it is amazing with really good grammar and writing keep going and please don’t drop
Bro if you don't update soon I'm gonna give a one star review starting from tomorrow to until you update. The drop from the rating are gonna be faster then Rap God when he drop his beat
Excellent grammar and story telling so far. My only consternation is the updating speed but author obviously has a life and quality is better than quantity. Overall I highly recommend.
Really good so far. wish he had mandibles but that pretty minor. Thankfully he isnt a doormat. And he holds the honor. What more can you ask for 10/10.
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so far so good
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Really just read caz I thought for fun since it’s had only four chapters but I became so absorbed I want more chapters pls. And maybe like a image of the man character and some for the chapter would add to the quality. Like image of creatures being hunted doesn’t have to be super accurate u can always find fictional creature design images on Pinterest
The mc sounds hot so I read it. It was pretty good wasn't disappointed 🥳
it's an amazing story only problem is there aren't enough chapters other than that it's perfect
it's an amazing book loved it wish he would update he'll I'd I could I'd send some money to read more
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You a hoe. How you gonna give us the best four chapters to a yautja fanfic and the duo afterwards.
