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Comments of chapter undefined of Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game

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si_vis_pacem_para
si_vis_pacem_paraLv4si_vis_pacem_para

I like magic chapters

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Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv14Ghost_Playing

Author, I noticed that your paragraphs get VERY long. Maybe you should pay attention on when to cut them to have better visibility. Since currently, some of your paragraps are so long that if I were to go out of the chapter an come back that I’d need to refind on where I was. Now imagine what happens when you accidentally click on another chapter just to get back to the current chapter that you are reading just for you to search on where you where at which would be a pain in the a*s. Get it? Anyway, thanks for the magic chapter! I like magic chapters so gimme more chapters!

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Daoistynt
DaoistyntLv1Daoistynt

I would like to see more similar chapters. But, I would like to know more about this game to which Vesuvius refers. I would also like to have several narratives from several persons. Well, in conclusion, I want to say that more paragraphs are needed, because a large amount of information makes it difficult to learn it. (is this world and the game the same thing?🤔) . The head is super, thank you!

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HFurtado
HFurtadoLv2HFurtado

I personally don't like these chap but i understand that is imporant to write how he learn them and not inform the learing by a simple sentence, so for me maintain those parts but taking little space on the chap just like of the runic enchanter elf

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iwantasystem
iwantasystemLv12iwantasystem

No problem with the explanation of magic, but it feels like a lag is formed in the story, maybe either due to short chapters or less frequency. If you can't increase chapter frequency, at least try to include a portion of the story from other sides( like the Runic Enchanter story part). It will keep the storyline fresh in mind.

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Jean_Jean_1445
Jean_Jean_1445Lv2Jean_Jean_1445

I like magic exploration chapters too.

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Hydrated_Chingus
Hydrated_ChingusLv14Hydrated_Chingus

nice chapter

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OliveTwisted
OliveTwistedLv15OliveTwisted

Loving this novel so far! Please keep writing author! ❤️

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Colossus_Eye
Colossus_EyeLv15Colossus_Eye

Dope

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Shira_ori
Shira_oriLv14Shira_ori

Thanks for the great chapter😊

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QID_
QID_Lv15QID_

I find it better that way, like I like these chapters focused on the magic and how it works, don't change it please.

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rocketwind2
rocketwind2Lv14rocketwind2

It’s nice as long you don’t over so it

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freyagreene1459
freyagreene1459Lv15freyagreene1459

I like his experimentation with the spells it gives a reality feel as we take time to learn

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Croaker
CroakerLv15Croaker

I enjoy the explanation of exploring magic

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Thiago_Gomes_8808
Thiago_Gomes_8808Lv4Thiago_Gomes_8808

Obrigado pelo capitulo

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TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv11TyrantTron335

First

Dragonrandy
DragonrandyLv13Dragonrandy

i enjoy your descriptions on how to create the spells.

Imtheswordsman
ImtheswordsmanLv14Imtheswordsman

i think seeing him learn new spells helps to appreciate his growth plus it helps us understand the magic in question

fudd_0977
fudd_0977Lv15fudd_0977

me personally do enjoy the learning process you describe. illustrative or descriptive writing is good in some points but not so in others. its situational. but alas every reader has their own preference so as a writer please take the bad along side the good for as long as someone reads what you have created its called a success. keep the good work coming.

John_3366
John_3366Lv2John_3366

I think it's not that bad but I think he should get an overpowered skill