why does everything need to be harem!? it's an overused genre which at this point has ruined stories or actively put me off from reading stories. it's that and gender benders as well. Harems do not work if you do not know how to properly make it. no you can't say it's not a harem if it's only 2! THAT'S STILL A HAREM. god it's the worst thing other then seeing random stories with omegaverse.
As an author I'll be the first person to rate this book. Give it a try and maybe you will like it .
Well the start was quite interesting & different .The english is quite good & understandable . I am giving this novel 5 stars for this & to boost the morale of the author so that this doesn't get dropped
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Its only 3 chapters in right now but I still liked it . I hope it doesn’t get dropped
It was good at first...then it the weakness in the writing starts to show..I mean I get it he wants to show how powerful mc is but the scenarios just don't make sense half the time. It's a good read to be honest but not everyone's cup of tea. And please don't make him act like a cringey idiot..he reminds me of myself too much.
Hey Author can you make sure that you won't drop the novel. please make sure it.
Try imagining writing a book we’re the main character is in marvel [Comics] with all of dc’s powers ( I mean all the powers ,people, magic he can assimilate all of them into himself) all of dc into on man into marvel comic’s
Nice read so far. You might probably use Grammarly or something like that. Focus on environment details as I have seen some inconsistencies that don't go well with the way you are trying to describe. But a good read so far.
I Need more of this …………………………………………………………
One of the better fanfics out there. Interesting to read. I read fanfics to relax and this certainly helped. So thank you Mr. Author and please continue this. .................................................................
A great start, interesting concept and no grammar issues. There are only 4 chapters as of right now so overall a good read. ................
4/2/2/5/5. Interesting story that I couldn't get past chapter 8 of due to yuri being brought in. For that I docked 3 stars for both story dev and character design. The English is surprisingly good for someone whose first language isn't english. This does make me worry about author's other fic and if there is gonna be qu*er garbage in that too
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Please continue.
Very nice and interesting.
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