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Comments of chapter undefined of I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick

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Mirio_kun
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I don't care about Harem as long as the story quality doesn't go down. Too many love interest will destroy the story so don't rush to make more love interest and plan a draft on which direction the story will go. Thanks 👍

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Dao_Master_Penguin
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The reason I say hinata is because in cannon naruto she was pretty much ignored and treated more like a second choice and Naruto never really deserved her, her love was more of an obsession than love. In this Fanfic naruto still ignored her only taking notice when she became more cheerful and attractive, he never really saw her for who she truly was. Plus all the naruto ff I read stayed away from her, so I wanted to see somthing more interesting. I’ll always support you with stones when I have them available!

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DaoistAlucard
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There are only a few novels where Tsunade is a love interest and even fewer that do it right. It would also be interessting to see how you write the interactions between her an Wu. You even teased it in the beginnig of the novel. I imagine she could be similar to Tsubaki from EPIC and she was one of the characters that i liked the most in that novel. Anyway thanks for your work so far. I'm really enjoying this fanfic.

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True_Mercury
True_MercuryLv11True_Mercury

I personally wouldn't mind seeing 1 or 2 defections from otogakure to join his harem, though even then it doesn't necessarily have to be a normal relationship. Their relationship could be something like getting knocked up while at otogakure but follows him to konoha so their children will at least have a strong father to train them?

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Wargram
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i read tons of naruto fanfic And yet Fail to see any clan building novels But looking at possibility maybe this novel will have it About harem maybe add those who have sad fate Still love this novel TY Author-sama

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DaoistDark
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Personally I think that hinata belongs in that harem list but I also wouldn’ t want anything that conflicts with your original plans for this novel. The harem should absolutely be kept small with five being the absolute max. This novel has been genuinely fantastic so far, if you want to expand more and have the mc branch out to other places then fine. But I feel that having a Contained focused novel is more important then an ever expanding one. I would rather just have a contained Naruto fic then an ever expanding one but at the end of the day it’s your choice.

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LordPocky
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if I was gonna add someone it would probably be Kaia. puppy like girl ftw 😂 and she already sees him as pack leader. in a previous comment I said 7 is where a harem goes nuts. but honestly 4 to 5 as long as girls have something to offer is fine. If Naruto is treating Hinata well due to Wu's advice I say keep them together. Sakura can stay away and I personally never like Ino.

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Ederel
EderelLv13Ederel

I hope that you would continue with your original harem trio. Epic had a massive harem which was nice, but after 20 members I couldn't remember half of them. I would hope for going to other continents only if you already had plans for that. World travelling would just muddy the story and I am tired of so many world jumping novels already. I can only say that just follow with your ideas getting suggestions is good, but you don't need to listen to everything and just ignore the haters. There is no story that can cater to everybody, so they would just leave or they just want attention.

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Gutek_YT
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on my side I want to point out that 5$ a month isn't a lot but with our numbers we can make it count like seriously... this Man is providing so much good content and despite that calling him frugal would be an uderstatement this is to tho who don't read paragraph comments xD

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Ryofu
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+1 for Hinata. Her attraction to Naruto never made sense in the series and nether does it now. With the fact Naruto was fixated on Sakura coupled with the MC helping her for more than 3 year, which endend up increasing her confidence and having a better "family" dinamic due to her training, make in impossible for her to end up with Naruto... (need to change the timeskip chapter to correct that). In the end, it's the dynamic of the "timeskip" that seem wierd to me. Sakura and Ino were infatuated with Sasuke because they wanted to be with the "coolest" boy and the "prestige", Hinata was because Naruto helped and complimented her once... None of those would stand the character develoment they had just before the timeskip.

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ZingLC
ZingLCLv13ZingLC

I am amazed at your update speed. Your story is great and I get happy when I see an update. Thank you!! I would personally pay $10 (or more) per month for 15-30 advance chapters if it doesn't impact your current update schedule XD. Not sure if this means anything but hopefully it helps. Also why was it so difficult to find your patreon!? I found it on a comment on the main page!! Plug more bro!

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john_hathaway
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I don't really have an opinion on who SHOULD join the harem but my opinion on why Ino, Sakura, and Hinata SHOULDN'T is all three are getting what they wanted and are happy and I don't want them to experience any unnecessary heartache because of messy breakups/deaths. That's what I think anyway.

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Enorracs_Nemoris
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ino because it's on the cover of the fanfic I don't like it when the cover lies

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SomeOne1
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Hanabi

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Warstar
WarstarLv5Warstar

Ju I will only put my personal opinion without seeing the general picture. I think 5 maximum and I will not say who I prefer that you choose them to taste, the only thing that would be nice is to see something happening in otogakure, otherwise everything is fine if you want to see something with an exclusive character so much remember that you do not have your memory of adult what child would put such a ntr because yes lol more when they are not even worth it from their perspective. I just say peace and love.

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OllieZ
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The original trio seems fine to me. Like many people said, 5 should be max, but I am actually more excited for a Clan Building. Still, in Konoha he is already known as a Sarutobi, and has been raised by their loyal Clan Summons, so IDK how would that go if he wants to create another Clan.

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CultivatingReader
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Tsunade. I love me some powerful older women.

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Gutek_YT
Gutek_YTModeratorGutek_YT

first

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Daoist9hvV31
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I can finally die peacefully with granny tsunade having married

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Sebastym
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Hanabi, there are practically no good fanfics with her as a couple, you could put her as the last couple since she is the youngest in very advanced chapters that begin to fall in love, I think she would leave only 4 in the harem, but it is already difficult for her to spend time with each one xD He could go out to explore the world and it turns out that his continent is one of many that was somehow never discovered, and when he goes out to explore it turns out to be the world of One Piece xd, you could also make out that there were a few more islands nearby that were unknown to those of One Piece if you want so that you can do what you want and then meet those of One Piece. And yes, also that she goes to 1 or 2 more worlds but that they are with more powerful power levels each time they continue xd, the last one maybe one of cultivation. That is what I think.