Writing Quality ★★★;
Stability of Updates★★★;
Story Development★★;
Character Design★★;
World Background★★.
The idea was interesting and entertaining. The problem is that I notice too many forced situations, gaps in the plot lines.
Author, unfortunately my score does not reach three stars in total (the minimum for a story to be considered good). I wish you encouragement, luck and have fun with your fanfic.
(Google Traductor)