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Amazing first chapter, love the story line progression
Good opening chapter thank you
ahhh first chapter is interesting!!!đ„°đ„°đ„°
I have overall positive thoughts about this story. If this one chapter is a representative of the story, then you pass the test. Well written and story driven.
great chapter just a few little things to work on.
Nice chapter
Loved this chapter
Hmmm...This chapter had me at the intro
Good story line.... Check this para again.
Chapter is well written
