Comments of chapter undefined of Madara in the Avatar World
Madara in the Avatar World
KojiSan
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Bro.......... Airships are strategical weapons. Buying it during war from an enemy nation is already beyond impossible, let alone from a enemy nation with feudal system.
That's the dilemma I'm facing. This story is good and bad at the same time. Your writing style and flow of the story is excellent š, but the scenarios are ...... š
KojiSan:mate.. if its that bad to you.. dont read it
Ok, now the world will meet Akatsuki, it will be great, I hope to see the whole team, earth, water and fire teachers, martial artists... Although I think the order of the Lotus is more OP, basically they are the most OP teachers in the avatar world and to be better than them, Madara will have to work hard... Well, there's the Avatar team that basically have plot armor as well.
Less mistakes this chapter, so that is nice. Also love it..sad that Madara didn't get to stick around longer to influence Toph more and act as her big brother figure... I wonder if he's allowed to visit every now and then? I mean, she can see with her feet, so she should know he's around. I mean, if they don't meet until he encounters her with the Gaang, I could see her being pretty upset with him even if she mostly hates her mother because of it. Y'know, I'm kinda interested in the consequences to a 5 year old Toph's psyche as he gets fired and kicked out when she grows up. Anyways, keep up the good work! :D
I don't mean to be a stickler as I really like this story but I'm pretty sure they didn't even have them yet? Didn't the people who moved in to the air temple ruins invent it with soka and then the fire nation got their hands on the plans and made then more suited to war? This is several years to early no?
