Comments of chapter undefined of DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD
DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD
CORNBRINGER
Chapter comments62
This whole chapter is just accepting. I feel, since several chapters, it is just the same, or more like the complete fanfic. Accepting that he has Power, accepting to bear responsibilities, etc. It's not the worst but it leaves a sour taste in my mouth. The last thing maybe shows more of the change the characters go through, without the use of their POV and how they accept their powers, fears, heritage, etc. It feels repetitive like the things I write in this comment. Everything in this comment is just how I think and feel about this fanfic and it is a good ff but just a tad repetitive. Did you also know that cows have only one stomach but it is split into 4 compartments? Their names are rumen, reticulum, omasum, and abomasum. To all of you, have a great day or night.
I can see this monologue with self happen in real life, but i dont see the need of writing and posting this chapter. Basically there is 0 important or interesting stuff happening here, I feel like I've been scammed. Would be better if this monologue would have been a part of another chapter and 3-4 times shorter, cuz this monologue repeats itself in terms of meaning, just using different words every paragraph.
