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Comments of chapter undefined of The Villain's Story

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PoopieBooty
PoopieBootyLv2PoopieBooty

So it wasnt enough for him just to be her bodyguard but you even made him her dog and gave her a rank up for what? Feeding him a potion? Just make her the MC at this point. Dropped

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Yuuki123
Yuuki123Lv6Yuuki123

drop he basically become her slave

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UrizenVergil
UrizenVergilLv4UrizenVergil

its way too forced

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finalgetsuga
finalgetsugaLv1finalgetsuga

This had so much potential

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cpd_007
cpd_007Lv3cpd_007

lol man his life is in hands of a brat.

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John_nut
John_nutLv15John_nut

Man.. Im really starting not to like this idea. Regardless if she wont do nothing or not.

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Adwin_007
Adwin_007Lv4Adwin_007

noo it should be equal if alan died sabrina also die with him that how it should don't author don't make Allen a simp

OverlordBGs
OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Man nice chapter and all but the soul thing not a good move on your part author

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Phoebus_Aphos
Phoebus_AphosLv14Phoebus_Aphos

thanks for chap

Admiral_Alex
Admiral_AlexLv15Admiral_Alex

WIll the MC ever escape Sabrina’s clutches and move on with his life? “There is nothing more pathetic than a slave who begins to trust his slaver” - Sunny Shadow Slave

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penitenceofshadows
penitenceofshadowsLv12penitenceofshadows

Thanks for the chapter. I may not like the idea but after reading Chinese novels I can deal with pretty much anything

animeanything
animeanythingLv13animeanything

Thanks for the chapter

Blazuku
BlazukuAuthorBlazuku

hmmm, what about character development? Sabrinas character is unique due to her circumstances. I will explain her character a lot in the later chapters

MoreMercury76
MoreMercury76Lv14MoreMercury76

thanks for the chapter