Ketsueki_Hasu
Author!! Great lemons, I'm not usually a fan, but you did a fantastic job. I loved how they were both assertive and clearly cared about each other's well being and enjoyment. If we are offering suggestions, I'll argue that Mistress instead of Master is sexier in their dynamic. It's a matter of preference though, so both are good. Question: Does Jahi have both privates? Or does she have exclusively the masculine one? I think having both opens up more opportunities for future fun, the more variety the better for this type of scene in my opinion.
Thanks for the chapter author. I don't really know how to review the lemon, but it was really good and I enjoyed it. I think it was all well written in general and I liked the "tearing" scene. I think it's better than how most other authors write about it. Maybe it could have been a bit longer with the actual intercourse but it was alright because you made them go twice. Maybe in future lemons we could see the rope or different positions? (Personally I want to see Kat on top lol) Anyways that's all I have to say. Thanks again author and have a great day!
Hey author i am new to webnovel and I only downloaded it to read your fanfic after i stumbled upon it on google. Also i have a petty request if you don't mind. Can u make it possible for Kat to be able to use other elements too. Like imagine a combination of time and space how cool would that be. Pretty please ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ )‧º·˚