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Comments of chapter undefined of Synthwave

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Synthwave

RogerKaos

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Kueni
KueniLv1Kueni

Another fun chapter, I'm really liking the relationship between Farshtey and Synthwave, but one thing to watch out for is avoiding the word then all the time so it doesn't get overused, keep that mine and continue writing.

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Kueni
KueniLv1Kueni

that's right Then, avoid using it too much I say as little as you can along with any other word that gets repeated a lot in the story.

RogerKaos:You mean the actual word "Then"?
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