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Comments of chapter undefined of Synthwave

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Synthwave

RogerKaos

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Kueni
KueniLv1Kueni

Got to the first chapter, funny thing is I started on the second one first by accident and I like it a lot, and like the second chapter the first chapter has a lot of great detail to the main characters along with a fun atmosphere, the writing style too is of my liking since I as well, started that way.

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Kueni
KueniLv1Kueni

Either way, the I still enjoy it đŸ’Ș

RogerKaos:It's fine, it happens! Actually it would have also been good if I started things with Farshtey's P.O.V first and then Synthwave shows up. Kind of like Doctor Who's both beginnings (1963 and 2005 respectively)
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Night_of_Dreams
Night_of_DreamsLv4Night_of_Dreams

well done nice first chapter

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MasterPizza
MasterPizzaLv3MasterPizza

Good first chap. I was quite surprised by the way you wrote the dialogues, but not in a bad way. I got a good first impression of the MC. I hope you try to add more "life" in some dialogues, like how their expressions were or their doings while speaking, etc... Overall, good work!

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