I happened to find out this book because of such an interesting title, but I'll be frank here since it disappointed me a little. Writing quality definitely needs to be upgraded since I feel the sentences end so abruptly that it really breaks my flow of reading. There are a few grammatical mistakes and some unnecessary brackets around texts.
I wish if character's emotions, actions and their surroundings could be described more elaborately since I can feel a huge amount of potential sparking in this story. I would appreciate if author could read some other books to get some idea and directions. With all that, I wish the author all the best for his/her/their upcoming chapters☺️