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Comments of chapter undefined of Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Kuroko_Lucifer
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Marcus_whatever
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Ignore the haters this is a good fanfic there's not really much wrong with it unless it constructive criticism you should just ignore it as people just being trolls

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XueYing0132
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Just so you know, having many haters doesn't mean it's a failure it may be a sign that you're going in the right direction. ;)

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Selectials
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If they have a child, then let it be a girl.

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Uncanny7
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But I'm enjoying the fanfic. Some will despise the fanfic,simply ignore them.

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MeepsNewGroove
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Lol, dont worry about the idiots wanting this to be a multiverse traveler FF, they are mainly the ones who want a “Pokémon gotta catch em all” type Mc. Just focus on what you wanna do and what you think you’d enjoy. If you think it should be short and sweet? Do it. If you want it long and savory, F them and just keep pushing broski 🤘

Kilowann
KilowannLv4Kilowann

your work is good. keep doing that [img=recommend]

uncreativeguy
uncreativeguyLv4uncreativeguy

This fanfic is not a failure, the kids who are hating on the fanfics are the failures.

TWIN_GMD
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Demonwolf07
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It's good in my opinion. But it's your choice. Just so you know It is a nice read with nice concept. And I know how hard it is to write something. so Thank you for your hardwork.

Iceling
IcelingLv14Iceling

I like the story, I just think it focuses too much on the the love than the action. I still like it though.

B0r3d_Guy_1
B0r3d_Guy_1Lv13B0r3d_Guy_1

The fanfic isnt a failure. You just need to touch up on some areas and it will be really good. Dialogue between characters could be improved and the whole relationship thing should take more of a back seat i think. Other than that there isnt really much to say.

J3_R0_M3
J3_R0_M3Lv13J3_R0_M3

Your story, it's good, for you to want to quit just because of haters is showing your quitting mentality. Can you finish a fanfic of Solo Leveling or another popular story out there with that mentality? There's only one thing I can think I hate in your story, it is the romance. You already have short chapters and slow updates, but you still wasting chapters that takes time to update focusing on romance, romance that is not relevant to the progress of the story. That's why in shounen manga the romance is only a sub-plot and it came in the middle or later part of the story. If that's the problem then the solution is just to avoid romance in a meantime. I know it's hard to make a story but compare to light novels your 30 short chapters isn't gonna finish the first story arc so you can still change things to make it better. Just don't quit, you have a good story in your mind.

Dio_The_Sage
Dio_The_SageLv13Dio_The_Sage

how is it a failure tho, this is good, the pace, character interaction, the plot, ect.

Crimson_King
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This story is definitely not a failure. Im glad to see it is still being updated up to this day.