being reworked

Personally, I'm not a fan of fast-paced ones but this one managed to grab my attention. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes and the reading experience is smooth. Anyways for those who are reading my comment definitely give this book a chance you won't regret it.

Good story, but definitely needs more chapters. You can see in this novel a lot of potential. Sometimes only grammar is lame but I can get over it.

So far so good. I like the story and I think it's developing quite well. Can't wait to see more of the story in the future as I follow the adventure.

Loving Fade to Black so far, can’t wait for more. Hopefully the writer fixes some grammar issues in the future but besides that everything’s cool. :D

Kosho and Koshomura. Those names make my body tremble with excitement. Why don't they exist in our world? Well that is probably because if they did many people would die everyday 😅. Nice story from the author. There are some grammar errors here and there but the story is interesting and unique. Author you have my 5 stars. Keep up the good work

Uww~ never read this kind of novel before.... So thought of giving it a try and now become a fan of it... Nicely developed story and the characters are awesome itselfs... U can see comedy, action, drama everything l want in a novel.... Well done author... Hoping to see more of it....

Good work author, I must say that your synopsis was captivating and when I opened the book, I wasn't disappointed, the plot is interesting and the chapters are well written. And even though the chapters are not much yet, I can tell that the book has great potential. so keep it up author. I'm rooting for you🙌🙌🙌

Good one! Like the story and characters. Interesting. As a reader, only have one suggestion for the author. Try to use less dialogue otherwise, it will get boring in the future. Hope to see what comes next! Best of luck.

This novel is filled with non-stop action. Something is always happening. There are plenty of fights. Each character has their own unique set of skills. I enjoyed reading about Yoto and the group that opposes the organized criminals of Drowning Fist. Which skills are better to use in each particular fight? Who should fight whom to win in a team fight? It was fun trying to guess the best option. I also liked how a koshomura had to learn to get along with their kosho to achieve great things. How do Mara’s mirror skills work? What can Mioki’s crows do? How does the Skeleton King fight? What are the 3 ways to become a koshumura? Read to find out!