good character development, I already feel an emotional connection to the main character. progresses at a good pace, and doesn't seem too long or drawn out yet. I'm excited to see where it goes from here!
As per usual shameless self review for 5 stars. I feel like I have a really unique idea here, and I'm enjoying writing this. It will be a little slower to release as Im a little busy in real life however there will be plenty to read.
Great so far. I can't wait to see what the Author has in store for the main character. updates are inconsistent, yes but that shouldn't take away from the prospect of reading this work.
