Comments of chapter undefined of LIFE: Phantom Slayers

I feel that "the monster" it's like a quantum creature... you bring him into "existence" once you start to observe him.

And btw how many words did you put in this first chapter? is it 1500? or more than 2000 words?

I can imagine the scary face of the Monster attacking him, and I can also feel that my heart is pounding when the Monster is about to attack him.

I would be glad if he becomes a warrior fighting against phantoms like that!!

In my opinion, the first chapter is a good start, but because of the length of the writing, it makes me a bit bored to read it, even though the story is interesting... But I think it's better if you make this chapter into two chapters, to make it more comfortable to read.✌