jdbeue
Author if you're reading this, that's cool. In general, it seems to me that there is not enough P18 that would dilute the content.
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thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work đđ Hope to see you upload chapters more regularly again. The writing quality is pretty good but if possible please describe his surroundings a bit as well. Like how big something is or what colour or even the design and details. all this adds more depth to the world you're building and increases the immersion of the readers. This is just a humble request/advice please dont mind me saying this stuff.