Comments of chapter undefined of ALL I WANT IS A SECOND CHANCE TO LIVE AGAIN.

I love how chapter 1 of the story turned out. Apart from few writing mistakes, this chapter is so awesome. I love the old man and his words very much and my favorite quote is where he said: "Every day in my world, people come in like ants. They were blindfolded. They think like you and believe suicide is their best option. But it lead them to seek what cannot be granted- a second chance to live again." This chapter contains a lot that's so awesome. But I think it needs a little work with the scene description. Keep up the good work. I'm loving this book already.