Emanuel_Alegre
Why can't he just ask to be called red instead of actually being known as Red, because that is the worst name and it literally means red only but associated with sacrifice, danger, courage, heat, activity, passion, sexuality, anger, love, and joy. While his actual name, Nicholas Weasley, is so much better with Nicholas meaning *Victory of the people* from it's origins in Greek, while Weasley means *Devious, cunning, misleading and sneaky* so why do you have to be an Imbecile.
Because of that stupidity of yours, which by the way, you have to be very stupid not to realize that the plot of the protagonist with the mind of an adult reincarnated into a child throwing a tantrum because he didn't like his name was good. On top of that, your laziness in not rewriting it makes the story get such a bad rating since most people complain about it.
Emanuel_Alegre:There are many problems, and the grammar too. It was the first time I wrote and I didn't care about many things, I left some things meaningless because they were part of the original idea that came to my mind when it all started. Now I see it and if it is very silly but I do not change it, since like grammatical errors, I hardly have time to write it.
I've been creating my own Harry Potter story for a while, I always thought of a new character being Ron's twin brother. That new character would be selected in Slytherin, and he would be cool and use his ego to deal with certain situations. But I must say that the main mistake is the immature and ridiculous mentality of your protagonist, if you wanted him to act that way you would never have mentioned that he has the memories of his afterlife ... Anyway, I hope it improves later.
this is something that I never got with novels that have concepts of keeping souls in the void and stuff like that you wouldn't lose or get your emotions dampened you would more than likely just go insane I find it so stupid at the fact that he got his emotions dampened instead of going insane unless something went wrong for his emotions to be dampened and also the whole changing his name to red thing was so dumb and immature should off just kept his name as Nick cause now watching home get called red is annoying me and the fact that I'm annoyed over something like that is stressing me out 😂
Huh odd name but ok sorta like trainer red from Pokemon I guess lol. Woulda asked to be named Nicholas or Nick just so I could make jokes like "Call me Nicholas Scratch or Nick for short". And those who are in the know would be seeing the hair & eyes then wonder "Soooo you're the devil?" Hehe or any other name related to some demonic being to creep people out even if i just used only as an alias.