Love it. Keep up the good work. I'm very excited to see where this story will go and is really happy to see each and every update. Every update brings a smile to my face.
[ a tad spoiler-y from here ]
Poly isn't something you see everyday and I'm kinda hoping that it'll be written decently, so surprise me, butter.
I love Kasumi, she's just great. Loved the backstory for her, the memory loss. All of it is just nicely written. I love her new parents.
I'm hoping to see more of the darker elements you've promised be implemented, a little more trauma brings me glee— ehem, I mean... Dark is good. Love it with the concept you have. And that's about it with my review XD
Also if you haven't noticed I've been calling you butter. So I'll just call you butter from now on and forever, butter.
THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD