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Comments of chapter undefined of One piece: Unwilling Idle System User

laliel
lalielLv13laliel

Elena X Mc please đŸ„ș

emrysw
emryswLv4emrysw

Thanks for the chapter. I don’t think it was too edgy, elena can basically be considered as his only parental figure so his reaction can be expected.

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

Thx for chapter and this is when he awakens the Conqueror Haki , and MC should go out to sea and get some experience and he’s goes to Whiskey Peak during the canon and reunites with Vivi again and finds out what happening back home and joins the straw hats and heading back home and during the trip Vivi and MC start develop romantic feelings for each other during the trip to Alabaster

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

MC Devil Fruit Sun Sun Fruit More More Fruit Sand Sand Fruit Float Float Fruit Lightning Lightning Fruit Cloud Cloud Fruit

Demon_Lord_Panda
Demon_Lord_PandaLv15Demon_Lord_Panda

Thx and I don’t think he was to edgy but I hope that this shows him that not every thing is fair

Said_Palacio
Said_PalacioLv12Said_Palacio

Please, he doesn't need a trauma that turns him into an avenging emo

vicky111mudi
vicky111mudiLv5vicky111mudi

voice of all things -3 but he is still a bad singer... that just preposterous

Mugetsu353
Mugetsu353Lv3Mugetsu353

The Mc should have a better body due to his physical stats

system
systemLv4system

Thanks for the chapter author San 😀 please keep up the good work 😀 it was not edgy bro

coldpyr0
coldpyr0Lv14coldpyr0

He has super human reflexes and speed. I feel like you've nerfed the MC back into being an idiot despite him being 12 and having at least some education and experience to force him to just stand there like an idiot. I highly doubt that this is the first time he's stumbled into pirates with hostages in his YEARS of fighting pirates in a populated city. This just feels so forced and cliché that it kind of kills my interest in the story...

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

With his healing speed he should be gaining muscle quicker and having no fat and growing faster then normal as well as being healthier then anyone really, to the point where right now I'm pretty sure he could live past 100 years.

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

I feel like he should be getting points quicker then he is now seeing how he's been beating bad guys with one hit over and over again so he should have a bunch of practice dummies wearing him 25 points each s c

WalterHeisenberg
WalterHeisenbergLv4WalterHeisenberg

Mehh

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

Next chapter please author

PapaJahatz
PapaJahatzLv4PapaJahatz

please i want more please

Daoist347762
Daoist347762Lv1Daoist347762

Sabes, aunque se dijo que MC se va a desmotivar, eso serĂ­a una pena por como va la historia. Si a la minima que algo no sale como quieres se rinde, pierde sentido seguir leyendo. Espero que Elena no muera, eso seria muy cliche.

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125678901234567909Lv14125678901234567909

Great Chapter

Miguel_Sayjin
Miguel_SayjinLv2Miguel_Sayjin

kill them

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❀❀

Jailing
JailingLv5Jailing

Thank you for the chapter !

Justsome_nobody
Justsome_nobodyLv13Justsome_nobody

Thanks for the amazing chapter [img=recommend]