Comments of chapter undefined of Peaky Blinders: The Mafia System[HIATUS]

Пишу какую-то хрень на своем языке. Люди которые это перевели и читают это. Молодцы, вы скоро станете русским. Нет это не какой-то спойлер как вы могли подумать. Хотя нет, самым старательным которые перевели это я оставлю вот что - У Виктора будет ребенок xD

I love the story, but your Quality certainly has gone down. Plot holes, small but impactful grammar mistakes, and Last but not least, writing things that never happened in your Story xD.

what are they?

Emilia could have been shot in the head for being so irrational as to point the gun at 3 experienced men, so at least there could have been some character development and she would have been of some use.

Thanks for the chapter! I have great expectations for this fanfic

Mc need to teach these guys a Lesson or two Shelbys too cocky

They messed up big time also Viktor isn’t the type to work under anyone and he already has a family sort Shelby take your offer elsewhere.

hopefully John gets killed😊

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Thanks for the chapter, enjoyed seeing them meet

chapters are hella short my guy

bro it has already been a day where is the next chapter you are killing me right now

Где глава

thanks for the chapters

Nice

Thank you for the chapter

xp

Too short