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Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth: Dancing In My Destiny

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tanu_sam
tanu_samLv13tanu_sam

Nice story. If you don't mind can I pinpoint something? When you are using past tense, avoid using present in the same paragraph. Sometimes it gets confusing. It will be better to use one tense whichever you are comfortable in.

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Lazzyname
LazzynameLv14Lazzyname

Story isn’t bad so far, but it sort of bothers me that she doesn’t seem to care at this point about not having her child anymore. Not being with the ex means that kid won’t be born and I feel like she should be concerned if not devastated by that as a mother.

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elcee_arti
elcee_artiLv14elcee_arti

if she have a consciousness of her future life with Dustin...how about her consciousness with her son? Would she have a peace of mind living another timeliness without her son?

Daria_Natka_6749
Daria_Natka_6749Lv3Daria_Natka_6749

I like rebirth stories but here the start is just too fast. In 10minutes after rebirth she decided jump from one guy to another.

Asfiya_1643
Asfiya_1643Lv3Asfiya_1643

that was so fast of her to blush at his touch for the first time 🙂...i know she's the fl and his the ml so the will be together but..u see the speed at which she changes her feelings .....

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Nande_Boyce
Nande_BoyceLv15Nande_Boyce

I agree with her last statement ...boss up honey and believe me woman can do it all 👌👌🤗🤩

Crisna_Mae_Cadenas
Crisna_Mae_CadenasLv3Crisna_Mae_Cadenas

I felt so ashamed by the FL why does she think that Evan will marry her in the future, I mean yeah of course we know that they're the main character but pleaseeee author please give your characters some justice

Crisna_Mae_Cadenas
Crisna_Mae_CadenasLv3Crisna_Mae_Cadenas

i drop the other novel of this author and and read her other stories but it seems like same. I mean yeah she's reincarnated but does she have any consciousness to his son? and also what's that blushing thing? why so rush? author please give your character some justice

Neeta_Yadav_0837
Neeta_Yadav_0837Lv3Neeta_Yadav_0837

were should i read this novel free authar than this side