Comments of chapter undefined of THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

Mary jane

in the cover , MC is above 20... her right now he's 17

I can read bad stories however I can't read bad grammar. It gives me a headache.

A mixture of both marvel and DC? Yikes, he should start grinding his level/skills ASAP

I recommend heavily working on Grammer or using a website to assist you. other than that think about what a real person would say in a conversation because as of rn all of your interactions feel forced and unrealistic.

forgot the grammar, which is atrocious, the plot is idiotic and the dialogue is cringe

the grammar is to much for me....

it is a bit hard to read but I'm here for the harem and it seems interesting enough.

I hope there is no harem but if there is one pls have character development and also hope there no ass*oles in the harem like one sec they say you can f yourself than magically say “I love u” I don’t like kind said harem member or members. (Good luck writing)

Are you sure this chapter is edited. If it is how bad was it before?

Ah yes EDITED definitely

the convo are a bit iffy and doesnt sound or feel realistic. but everything seems interesting so far. cant wait to read more.

so why was the mc in boot camp just for "anger issues"

Author , you gotta ya know reduce your grammer errors, novels pretty good

Nice story 👍

Thanks for the chapter I like cookies

Wait, read this on Wattpad It's in Spanish And above all it is called this is not Marvel Until the work was finished, Richard remained as a universal god

its good..but the grammaar is..a little bit bad, i recommend working on that

This is so bad. Also Seriosuly Peter Parker’s brother? The most uncreative character insert into the universe.