Comments of chapter undefined of THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

The people where just robing the store nobody would have died but you escalated the situation to the point where he would shoot at people the best thing you could have done was just comply this is not heroic it is stupid and dangerous.

This style of writing is confusing. It’s inconvenient since you dont know when the person stops talking. The old “I am the MC” speach style is more reliable. Also, you don’t need to add text after each sentence said by the characters. Sometimes, simple is best.

Ugh.. why do so many people write dialogue in their story like they think they're playwrights? It's extremely irritating to read, and a lot of people will just totally skip a story without reading it if they see it. I know because I'm one of them, so bye.

exactly friends, don't learn from this example of history, if you are robbed it's best to hand things over peacefully, because objects can be bought again, but life can never be regained!

not to be offensive, but I think you need an editor, because your grammar is quite horrible

Dude... this is supposed the EDITED CHAPTER.... ghe grammar can make you die due to brain damage

Mi buen y apreciable amigo al menos dame algo de crédito si las vas a traducir a inglés

Wow, I haven't read grammar this bad in a long time, just put that it's horrible in the disclaimer, there's nothing "complicated" about it

People eat moles? Since when? Just let them dig their holes.

No, no... Spoilers No!!

What do you expect from a thief. This is a stolen work that was GOOGLE translated from spanish from here, wâttpâd côm/story/210912151-esto-no-es-marvel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Thanks for the chapter I like cookies

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

thanks for the really great chapter

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Grammar is bad but its not so bad i can barely even understand whats going on. Its still very legible to me.

thanks for the chapter