Comments of chapter undefined of Magical Mecha Knight

I finally catch up!!!, now I can say what's been in my mind do the author!!!! 1- As always, use grammarly(you are better than most i have read) 2- How many story's have you written because if this is your first then this is a really good starting story. 3- you need to get us more in love the characters that are going to put such emotional moments, they feel empty for the most part the same thing that I told you about the info dump about the kid yesterday here we are emotion(info) dumped so the feeling of lost/tragic feel overly fake, even though the part about the brother feel really good since it got me involve then it came the overly fake alexander with supper lost with a character that was introduced not more than 4 or 5 paragraph ago. 4- if you want to add characters like this one then you need to slowly introduced them from small topic like news, net comenct civilians talking about it etc etc .... i forgot the name about this type of foreshadowing in books but it's really a good way to get readers attached with a random character. Hope this helps and thank you for the chapter again!!