Okay. First, I would like to thank the author for putting in the effort to design an intriguing story. Because no matter if the novel is enjoyable or not, the impressions and reactions we tend to have are precious memories along the journey of reading.Honestly, this novel had tons of potential, but the author couldn't excavate it accordingly. The first two chapters alone set in motion a chilling past and a strong foundation for future plot progression. After, that the next 50 or so chapters solidify the 7 main girls who would presumably accompany the MC for a long time. Until this, things were acceptable. It could be reasoned that the author was setting in motion all the important stuff and possible plot developments. But then, the novel started going downhill. There are a number of things conforming this.1. magus ranks up to 'half-magus emperor' in the 'myriad wonder stellar chart' were very clearly explained in the earliest chapters. So it's logical that you would expect the MC to reach and surpass these realms within reasonable time frame, even with considerable fights, mysteries, character development. But even after 500 chapters, MC is still at 'One-star' Mage rank. In this case the MC's level progression is agonizingly slow, which is one of the biggest letdowns in my opinion.2. Throughout the entire myriad chart saga, nothing of monumental importance seems to be happening, so arch nemesis, no climactic fights, no forming of allies fighting against a stronger force. 3. Around chapter 250, MC enters the so called ruins. At chapter 560, the ruins arc is still ongoing, whose time frame has already surpassed his journey through the entire chart.But, this novel also has some pretty good points. The translation is decent, characters are explored in detail, not just generically forgotten like extras. Bonding between MC and his partners is especially deep and they grow along with him, which is admirable coz most authors in these genres make the Harem of MC flower vases after a certain time. World building is also good but only the 'wonder myriad stellar chart' has been explained in detail so far and the strory revolves around the beast factions.So, the main point is that the novel is good and has massive possibilities, but the author has to work on the pacing, which in my opinion, has been too slow till now.
