Death Games (Dropped)

Hello everyone, well, to whoever reads this in the future, I would really love some feedback or reviews on how to make the novel better, as of now this is my first novel and I really dont know how to do this. So comments on how to improve would really help me, anyway Peace ✌️ (Also dont mind the 5 stars)

Hey guys, I don't know where I found the picture, I just searched up "Anime glowing eyes" And it showed up, it didn't even have glowing eyes but with a bit of lowering saturation It turned out like the serious picture I wanted it to be, so I added some blur and filters and boom that happened.