Comments of chapter undefined of Surviving with my family during an Apocalypse

thanks for the chapter looking forward to the next one ⏩ also please don't drop

I think you shouldn't compress what the three girls are saying into one sentence cause it gets boring later on and they kinda feel like a same person instead of different entities. If you really want to keep their thoughts about Karl same you can make their responses have the same feeling but differently worded be a bit different from each other so that they can be made into their own characters instead of looking like a single 2D character. Or you can make the mother take the lead and have the other two nod and then show their inner thoughts. example: "Kyle you look very handsome today" Sophie said and the other two nodded in agreement. 'Ah my sweetie is looking so dashing today, I might just lose control.' 'Big brother looks so (idk what to say)' Lucy and Janah thought while nodding. Make them have a bit of difference cause even if they have the same feeling for him but they will have different interpretations of it like one may find safety, one may idolise him and other may have the same feeling or something else.

Ah nice chapter, but give separate dialogues to the girls.

Yo nice chap as always 🔥🔥 Some suggestions for Sophie : Safety Queen, Sunshine , Lovey, Guardian Angel, and maman 🥖🥐, mama-mia 🍝 Lucy : Sugar, Jewel, Big Sis, Diva, Sista, Chica, smarty, sis, sisty Janah: Cinderella, Gummy Bear, Doll Face, Sweetie, Smart Cookie, Princess, Lil one I hope these suggestions help u even though most of them are just a joke. As for u grouping all of karls names into one sentence it doesn't bother me (my personal opinion idk about others) . I just hope the MC isn't the good kind. We don't need firefighters or psychos. Just to give priority to himself and his family before everyone else. Good luck 🍀🤞

thanks for the novel, looks good. great expectations for this!!! hope his girls dont get hurt/traumatised with the events to come, oh also i hope is fath die in the apocalypse and if u dont want him to die early because of plot he dont need to be op like mc or someone important later on, well see what u have for us!! cheers