EvansKannon
Great chapter as always author, I really enjoyed seeing Hector taking a stance, in a way, similar to Superman, starting to be more active worldwide and not limited to just one City. I was also very pleased and even moved with his interaction with Peter, I think any Spider-Man fan, if he were in Hector's shoes, would have given similar advice to Peter, and of course his interaction with Steve was also great. I really like how you put us in Hector's mind and, in my case, it makes us reflect on what we would do in his place, keep it up and something very good to read. although simple, I also really liked his little interaction with my Waifu (Mary Jane), and apparently in the next chapter we will see his interaction with our beautiful Black Cat, I'm looking forward to that. until the 30th of October.
One thing I think the MC’s gotta try and do is upgrade his power stealing/copying mutant ability to were he can combine powers. He has a ton of powers, a lot of which I think are similar to each other. Like it would be better if instead of activating all his physical enhancement powers he can just combine them into one.
For someone who has assimilated Batman and Light Yagami, Hector has a slightly unstructured mind. but maybe it's just the author's writing style that makes it look like that. and also suggestions for writers that it's better if you write in English, continue with English, don't mix it with other languages like when Hector said "Boku No Hero Academia" wouldn't it be better if it was said "My Hero Academia"? and maybe the author could reduce the use of short words like this example, "This world is like BNHA." replaced with "This world is like the world before it." or "This world is like the world of My Hero Academia." if you want to mention something like the brand or title of a fictional work or anything that might unsettle the reader may be mentioned vaguely but understandably. and one more author, the Omniverse is too small to accommodate all the works of fiction as described for this gacha, because in some fiction stories Above the omniverse there is an even higher dimension realm.