It's an interesting novel but it lacks you know the flare. It's fast paced sometimes it's good but it's too fast, insert more event you may have had many chapters but the total events that occured withinthose chapters can be written in a single page like I mean he got reborn, researched about his powers trained under jigen did a mission.... Like that's it. It needs more unique events different from the original storyline and try to make it longer use cut scenes to different scenarios, POV's and explain about background, give attention to details.One more thing use a cover. 😁😁
