Review with slight spoilers, but should be TAGS in my opinion so...
- Good grammar (just this makes it worthy of reading it, as a lot of Top Fanfictions here doesn't even have this LOL)
- Lucky protagonist: obvious as he literary spent a wish so his eyes can look for luck.
- Good pacing: even if I would like for him to spend time and train more his Pokemons.
- Good characters: specially humans. Needs a bit of work with his Pokemons personality though
- System that gives quests with generous rewards.
- Wish fulfillment, DUH: some people don't like this, but I do. Shiny Pokemon galore (though I hope you tone it down, to make shinies more special)
- Author post Images and Drawings! I love these kind of details hehe
Dislikes:
- That the start was with wishes, when 3/4 wishes could have been explained with his Noble family and a good bloodline (that goes well with his Noble family too). The last wish, the Eyes, could be his special ability too, without a need of a wish
- Edgy start with proper tragedy backstory (that was avoidable btw). Once you read one, you read them all.
My Wishes/Wants
- Don't have companions until much later. Focus first on MC's Pokemons training, bonding, and his own journey. Whenever you feel he has already his team completed, you can go ahead.
- You don't have to updates us all the time about what the side characters are doing. I appreciate it, but I like MC's journey more.
- More training montages. I don't know why, but I love them lol
Even though it's not perfect, it is a solid Pokemon fic. I recommend!
