TheMilflover
Thanks for the chapter. I’m enjoying the current development, though, I agree with Mimic. Even with character development in mind, establish with readers a base set of characteristics that Ethan will maintain and don’t flip-flop on them. Instantaneous mood changes are also jarring for readers and breaks immersion, so that is something else to keep in mind.
Thank you for considering Tiamat. Since you in the previous chapter made statements about Tiamat and her aunts that reminded her of the death of MC's father, you can slowly make Tiamat change from kuudere to yandere for fear of losing a loved one. And make her slowly jealous with her intimacy with lover. .the point is that tiamat becomes afraid of losing mc because of the death of her son and becomes yandere, after that you can make her slowly realize her feelings for mc when she sees the interaction of ethan and his lover. well these are just a few suggestions that maybe you can use for other characters if they don't fit or change