Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

If you are going to make the story under a different tag when you start it, could you post another update on this one telling us so I know when to look for it. You are a really good author and I don't want to miss your story but I fear I will forget to check, thanks.

I really liked this novel. Hope you'll write this again soon, Author.

:(((( So sad, I hope I don't miss whenever you upload the new version, as I really liked what you wrote. Thank you, and I hope to read you again!

wow, I'm somehow still waiting

I'm glad at the moment you very much plan to rewrite this story because I really like it. I'm definitely all for giving every pokemon line the stages missing for the standard 3. That said the pokemon harem sort of seems completely unnecessary and doesn't really seem to fit. The MC really doesn't care about romantic or sexual relationships and his relationship with majority of his team is entirely parental as can be seen in the way first three of his pokemon address him and considering that he literally raised them from the egg. I'm also not exactly interested in pokephilia. Though, I can understand pokemon gaining a human or at least humanoid form at quasi god or god levels. I'm also rather curious what you think about my alteration to the power stages' names I left under one of the other chapters. Btw, I'm not sure if you made note of it but you might want to work on character and environment descriptions. You described MC's colorations only in an author's note and your descriptions of some of the new evolutions or variants seemed insufficient. What does Crustle's evolution's Shell look like? Anyway, thank you for writing and sharing this story. I'm looking forward to any rewrites of it you will release. Oh! Are you going to add a notice of the rewrite being posted in this story? You probably should. See ya!

hello.

Hope that in the remake you make the mc not be such a emotional black hole. He sometimes feels like he has a cardboard cutout of what a real personality should be. Otherwise the story is great, love the characters and I love when we get the different POVs talking about the mc.

I look forward to haering from you again and as you can tell from everyone elses post we…

jeez, this was one of my favorites but I can understand your problem so I am not going to complain...

Dafuq man it was getting there. You hyped it so much already.

still waiting.......

I'm excited for the next chapter

Aight