very intresting and captivating story i fell in love with it at first read , good and intresting story plot, more knowledge and ideas to the author
Love the plot this is great work keep it up Author, do your best, Love these chapters a lot, good job Author, 💯💯keep it up Author loved your work, 💯✔️
The writing quality is overall fine. There are mistakes with word choice (for example the wrong tense of word is used). But that's the only real repetitive error. The pacing is good, and other elements of the story are fine.
Reveal spoiler
This book is awesome. It shows us the life of royalty. huh, after reading this book, I had decided to be a commoner. ugh, there are too many problems in becoming rich. lol
The story has potential. It seems like you plan out the plot ahead since the pacing is going well. I like how we as readers get an overview of what the MC’s personality is just from reading the first few lines. There were some small grammar mistakes but worry not, as it did not affect my reading experience at all. A little bit of polishing here and there would definitely helps your novel shine even more. Keep on writing :).
Keep up the good work, author! More Aonaran and Domenic bardagulan! I like how Aona always say that she should get back at Dome but always end up being submissive!
