For the first story, I had to stop it when Allison is trying to seduce Stiles, it's so so unnatural and unrealistic when you know the Allison of the cannon, it's pretty deg. The goal of becoming a chemist to be a mob boss is so little for someone with Stiles' brains. Being a simple werewolf in the Teen Wolf universe has too many disadvantages. But, there's the theory that Stiles is magical, a spark I think it's called. Someone with magical ability that works on wish and unlimited. He would have been more powerful with and more independent in a pack. For the rewriting of the story, there are too few chapters to form an opinion
