Comments of chapter undefined of Vampire Fox Evolution System

It's feels rushed man. Kinda like you want to speed runt the novel. I personally think you need to explain more how the MC thinks and her inner monologue not just what she does. And more about the environment. And just basically make all the scenes slower but more in depth. Right now I'm not really immigrated in the story as it goes way to fast that it makes it unrealistic. Hopefully it gets better author, good luck 😉🖐️