Comments of chapter undefined of The Extra's Survival

So, Lucas will become another generic protagonist I read across this site once again. Hopefully, he would develop into a different sort of character when I'm continue reading this. Also, make up your mind, dude. There's a mix first person and third person all over the place. The first few chapters at the beginning isn't like this so what happened? Anyway, thx and be healthy but plz think of a way to improve your writing. Either way, this novel still make me reading it so hopefully, your writing will be improved in the future chapters.

check the grammar error

Gay?

Thanks for the chapter but to many grammer errors hope you fix it

Atuhor make Mc have a elf as his lovEr or an a human too no more no LeSs two wifes thats it

Thanks