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Comments of chapter undefined of In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.

Fahad501
Fahad501Lv5Fahad501

Nice but what is the point of taking Hinata is your Mc lolicon

Waifu_Avrora
Waifu_AvroraLv6Waifu_Avrora

can i have the link of the raws please??

Crystal_Cat:Well it's a translation I didn't really want to change it too much
Daoist_Anime
Daoist_AnimeLv13Daoist_Anime

I think it's good that its raiden. it fits better.

tyr12345
tyr12345Lv4tyr12345

this plan is horrible. its even worse than the original. why would u want to be discovered?its unnecessary. when he succeds everything is fine. when the ninja is discovered and killed u can demand compensation. when u plan for the ninja to be discovered, u basically just ask one of ur ninja to just die. thats what a bad leader would do. and when the ninja is captured, ur f***ed. by removing the target to escape, he effectively lowered the chances of the mission succeeding. you also need a beta reader. The structure of your sentences isnt very good.

Adri_Cejas
Adri_CejasLv11Adri_Cejas

With Enel's 100% template, up to Madara's sage of the six paths arc, he should have no problems. I see no reason to be afraid of the Hōkage.

Fanfic_Lovers
Fanfic_LoversLv3Fanfic_Lovers

Rayden👍.Yeyue lol👎

Dannyelle_Basse
Dannyelle_BasseLv1Dannyelle_Basse

Amigo, sin ofender, pero si estuvieras al 100% de Enel, solo un super Kage podria detenerte

Elysia_02
Elysia_02Lv2Elysia_02

Yeaa Raiden is better, in Honkai and Genshin Raiden name is the use of Lightning element so I like it

DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorLv5DivinDragonEmperor

Who tf is the golden glitter man?

cyberlector
cyberlectorLv5cyberlector

gracias por el capitulo

OneAutumnLeaf
OneAutumnLeafLv2OneAutumnLeaf

I think yeyue supposed to be translated to yotsuki. But raiden sound nice too Ps. Ye yue = Night moon Yotsuki means night moon

MIGGER_FTW
MIGGER_FTWLv1MIGGER_FTW

Reading!

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

Wouldnt they just brand and kill her? Maybe brand her and destroy her womb? This plan seems barely thought out if even barely.

Lnedarok123
Lnedarok123Lv1Lnedarok123

Como se parece o EMC?

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Interesting 🔥🔥 Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Tokyoghost
TokyoghostLv4Tokyoghost

this fic is like the opposite to another one im reading

5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter

Renzairo
RenzairoLv12Renzairo

thanks for the chapter

David_Cardozo
David_CardozoLv1David_Cardozo

Nice

Sau11
Sau11Lv14Sau11

thx for chapter

Kagami95
Kagami95Lv12Kagami95

Who is the love interest???