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Comments of chapter undefined of A Pervert's Dream (DISCONTINUED Until REWRITE)

OnlyMesha
OnlyMeshaLv2OnlyMesha

So far so good but I think it can be better if you increase the dialogue and ibteraction between the mc and other character but If you compare this chapter with the first chapter i can see the increase in amount of dialogue

dewon07
dewon07Lv4dewon07

now go to particle accelerator. and became speedster.

Aizen_Sousuke
Aizen_SousukeLv4Aizen_Sousuke

I'm a firm believer of having and not needing as to needing and not having so I would keep all the spider powers but I understand and respect your decision.

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

You don’t need to be a carbon copy. You can keep it in reserve if you need it. Having the webs can save your life. What are you going to do if you get thrown off a skyscraper while fighting villains? You can’t even stick to buildings AND you have no webbing? Moronic move.

Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

I personally like the idea the only thing I found annoying was being adopted by Parkers but I get it cause Author wanted to add Spider to story. I do hope that MC isn't infected by Hero Mentality though hes doing all this for power and training he should keep that mindset.

OfficialZwei
OfficialZweiLv5OfficialZwei

Love the progression keep it up man!

Alpha_Shaker
Alpha_ShakerLv4Alpha_Shaker

Awesome chapter but I really hope that the mc won't deal with clones

KoRSito
KoRSitoLv4KoRSito

then in the story there will be a "Green Goblin" (maybe a Lizarman and a Rhino) who will be far superior to his movie / comics omologists, thanks to the MC's efforts to improve his body and Osborn easily obtained it. Hahahahahahahaha...

Gladiusx
GladiusxLv6Gladiusx

Cheers, thanks for the chapter and keep it up~!

Sevennamed
SevennamedLv12Sevennamed

Thanks.

Daoist961469
Daoist961469Lv2Daoist961469

Everything seems fine to me

5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter

Visrow
VisrowLv14Visrow

This is great! Thanks for the chapters!!

Legacy_24
Legacy_24Lv14Legacy_24

I think its a great story thanks author sama

Naginn
NaginnLv3Naginn

Thanks for the chapter

vaatu
vaatuLv4vaatu

feed me more chapters

Lionel_LEE_TAM
Lionel_LEE_TAMLv4Lionel_LEE_TAM

Awesome chapter[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

aman10
aman10Lv4aman10

cant he go to ancient one for more learning the sorcery

MrSleepyAsh98ij3g
MrSleepyAsh98ij3gLv2MrSleepyAsh98ij3g

so....when is he going to MCU