So far so good but
I think it can be better if you increase the dialogue and ibteraction between the mc and other character but
If you compare this chapter with the first chapter i can see the increase in amount of dialogue
I'm a firm believer of having and not needing as to needing and not having so I would keep all the spider powers but I understand and respect your decision.
You don’t need to be a carbon copy. You can keep it in reserve if you need it. Having the webs can save your life. What are you going to do if you get thrown off a skyscraper while fighting villains? You can’t even stick to buildings AND you have no webbing? Moronic move.
I personally like the idea the only thing I found annoying was being adopted by Parkers but I get it cause Author wanted to add Spider to story. I do hope that MC isn't infected by Hero Mentality though hes doing all this for power and training he should keep that mindset.
then in the story there will be a "Green Goblin" (maybe a Lizarman and a Rhino) who will be far superior to his movie / comics omologists, thanks to the MC's efforts to improve his body and Osborn easily obtained it.
Hahahahahahahaha...