The translation is difficult to understand at some points. There's also run on sentences galore. Then there's the typical casual racism from Chinese novels. Last the magic is obviously going to be a mess. I didn't read far because it was screwy right from the get go and I refused to keep reading at that point. The idea has potential but it was quickly ruined.
Not much to say, other than its a generic dollar-menu faloo-type Chinese novel, with a healthy serving of plain racism. If you have nothing to read then...well I would suggest looking elsewhere.
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Nice pace...Good story telling...Good English...Fascinating plot....Overall a Good book you can enjoy anytime... Thank you Author...........
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How long is taking a break 💔? It been over a year.
its a very good novel not many erros but need more work in the background of the mc is a little slow he es not more than a nerfed mcin a hevy power world
Ok story. Good translation......................... Updating stability - good Writing Quality - good World background -good 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
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bro i appreciate that you copied from mtl and paste it here but there is already another one posting this same story here. name is, wizard in the world of marvel.
ok story and pretty good translation.
