Comments of chapter undefined of Dimensional chat group:The tale of a wannabe general in the Multiverse

Its good but its bad i like it i would read thIs on my free time tho

I already said my opinion on Paragraph comment. Although it's not that informative, hope you read it Author-san.

I would continue reading it cause I like this kind of stuff, but it's not very good and you probably know it since you posted this. Personally, things I didn't enjoy was the romance, it was way too rushed, plus (and I know it's in the original but,) I don't like how he just had a harem right from the get go. The action didn't get me excited and I'm simply not into gundams and the like. And although the characters you added are unique they aren't powerful or anything, of course if you continue and they get good rewards from the system this can change, but this also ties in with the fact that I don't like mechas, to me they are just tools and they aren't part of the character's personal strength, of course this is my opinion, if you like mechas I respect it 100%. Plus, it's weird how the other characters just sort of accept that Diodora got some mechas all of a sudden and don't question it at all. Anyway, whether you should rewrite or not, it's up to you, I tend to be against rewriting since from my experience most authors simply can't or don't know how to rewrite it and end up dropping the story. Anyway, good luck to you in whatever you choose to do.